this beat is sickening but I'm a disreguard the fact I heard this beat a million times.....ok ya quality is better but still terrible.....u need a new mic badly....your flow is decent....but its real basic....u focusing on hitting the snares instead of flowing like water over the beat....it hit snare but lacked any real rhythm.....your delivery sounds forced....I can tell u jus experimenting wit putting emotions in your verse cuz your emotion wasn't goign wit ya lyrics....it was either montone or you'd over do it....an raise ya voice or lower in a place where it wasn't warranted........but lyrically i like where u was coming from...but your lyrics were basic as well but they had a good message...jus keep elevating son...u def coming along

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