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Old 08-13-05, 12:55 AM   #23
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Voted For: Young Blaze

long ass battle.........

Young Blaze - you had an all round good verse, the structure was nice and laid back giving the verse a decent flow all the way through. punches were there and were consistently hard hitting, a lot of this though ....................... i thought that was unnecessary, the wordplay and shit was dope as always, cud get a little more complex in places with the rhyme scheme but it was still dope..........

Dizzle - your verse to me seemed kind of herbish, i dont know if you're new to this whole thing, but first drop the // at the end of lines cuz it looks gay. the flow was aight, kind of choppy sumtimes.....punches were there although not as hard hitting as blaze. you had a couple of ok ones that made me laugh but overall i think you lacked in consistency, also try beffin up ya punches with some killer wordplay n shit and you'll do better.

V/ - Young Blaze

plz....RTF on my marvjay battle....links in my siggy
oh and, if you don't my vote will be removed...(only cuz the voting on RV sucks ass lately) pz. again
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