dope ass battle.....

paroxysm..........this week you performed a lot better than last week, the topic was a good one and you brought a really good piece staying on the topic all the way through. an interesting approach, you did good with it and i was feeling the whole imagery you showed...vocabs were dope as fuck again, but in some parts like a couple of bars it went a little basic but with a long piece like you did it is hard to keep 100% with the complexity. the multies you put into the verse added that little extra and they were dope, the "Late At Night" section was the only part where i felt that you fell off slightly. my favourite parts of your verse were the opening segment and the closing four lines, they really topped your verse off for an awesome piece 8.5/10


Rev......a real good piece by you, took a different approach than paroxysm but still delivered the usual good shit.....stayed on topic all the way through and the whole thing flowed well from start to finish, i did feel that paroxysm had the better flowing verse due to the horrendous amount of multies he threw in. your vocabs were nice as always and consistent, like paroxysm you only fell off a couple of times in bars. the imagery of your piece was dope, i felt that you brought a better depiction of the topic to the reader, or at least for me it was like that....whether it was your approach to the topic or not, for me it gave it that added extra bit that made it top your opponents verse. 8.6/10


werd, lets see you get a more closer battle than that........but in the end

V/ - The Rev

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