Oh I'll just help you on here then. See honestly if you spit that in a freestyle outside it'll work well. Just its different on here I guess. You need complexity.

1st off wordplay is really good. Clice punches or familiar phrases work good sometimes.
Like this:

Clice= weakest link.
Punchline: the URL to your battle is the weakest link.

Shit like that. Take personals to your opponet to.
Diss him with shit specifically for him. His name etc use anything.

With you I can just say "bla you're in my shadow" or "your ranking is after your name".

simple shit like that. PS do NOT battle anyone over 500 posts. THeir simply tryna
get you cause you're new.