Voted For: Daubs

Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines-
cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/
^^^Played.....2/10
daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow-
plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/
^^NO...this is whack..a newbish punch...1/10
muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/
^^Hmm...coulda been better...3/10
ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'-
after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/
^^OK...dawg..how you know about Cosby's pubic hair?..ewww....2/10
play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours-
Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/
^^No....2/10

Bad.C'mon man.Ya flow was ite...had some multis...but structure sucked.Get rid of the "/".Makes it look newbish.And your punches...man....they were bad man.Upp your creativity up.None of those lines had creativity.All of them were geniric "you couldn;t do this or be this if you....".It's Ok to have that approach for a couple bars..but not a whole verse.And where the fuck are your personals?

You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream..
And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream)
^^Nice personal/punch here..creative too...7/10
Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable..
Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able..
^^Nice nameplay....6/10
The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath..
And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked..
^^Hmm...set-up was horrible,chess line?.nah...4/10
Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight..
And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!!
^^OK....6/10
Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends..
And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N..
^^Good....6/10

Ok.....good verse.Flow was ite.Structure was ite though you could get rid of some fillers and hypens.Punches is where you shined.As opposed to unfuck...you had personals in your verse.The best bar was ur opener where you ripped on his address..a creative punch.My opinion..a one-sided battle

Vote-Daubs
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