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i put a bounty on ya head,fill ya wit lead,wont stop till ya dead
^^not a punch....0/10
u were asked if u wanted pussy and u said wut the fuck,battle me bitch,?ur a sittin duck
^^post link to him sayin that....2/10
and dont cry too much when u git merked by me,u should retire cuz ur rymes r gittin older than movies starrin bruce lee
^^Basic as fuck.....1/10
u call the police on me,for abusin u verbally,i bombed on u uncontrolably
^^did he call police on you?..proof?...fake personal?...2/10
u should take cheap ass rymes and throw em out,i aint gotta rap cuz this shyt is a blow out
^^Not a punch....0/10
i can get to downtown gotham by the batmobile quick,the only way u can go quick is by ridin ur pops dick
^^how is riding his pops...go quicK?..0/10
this is like the red sox 1 title compared to the yankees 26,to calm urself down u need to suck a couple dicks
^^didn't rhyme well....1/10
and let me know how ur mom felt last night,next time if you want me to go eay on you... i just might
^^Not a punch.
My god...this was bad.OK...first put ya structure normal...like how ya oppenent and 90% of this site does.Flow was ite...tho some lines didn't rhyme.Punches...well...there barely were punches.It was just you talking shit.Like that 1st and last bar for example...they weren't punches...it didn't diss at all.Then there were some lines like you talkin bout he called police on you...when there was no link..& I doubt it's true...so fake personal.The rest of ur lines were basic punches.WORK ON EVERYTHING.
come on man, ur a noob battaling a vet, get real man wat the fuck
ur flow is like ur personality, dark and gloomy, so i guess ill have to "light" u up
^^hmm......not all that....3/10
jus cuz i got a better flow and harder punches than u do im the item of ur despise
what the hell u hating for, o yeah i know, cuz my flow is faster than that car u drive
^^OK.....4/10
u aint even accept the battle yet, dont give me that "my own pace"
da only reason dis nigga come out at night so in the good light we cant see his ugly face
^^hmm....I asume you base'n it on his name..so ite..4/10
come on nigga for real man, get real and quit ur night job, u aint doing shit anyway
cuz no matter what u doing u still nothing but a herb bitch all the fucking day
^^Meh...basic...3/10
Welll....this verse seemed like a free to me.DIdn't seem like you tried...and you didn't need to neither.Those 2 light bars you have...I assume you based it on his Batman name...so it's all good.Lines were basic as fuck...tho not as much as Batman's.Structure was ite...flow stayed ok throughout the verse.
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