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IP:
Voted For: Detinate
BSmite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited
Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited
Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill
Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill"
Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit
^decent flow so far, could be better. Decent hits and
analogies, but you contradict yourself w/ the "soft like tit"
because, even though i get it, we love tits!
If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit"
I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black
Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!!
^Good personals
Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow
With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show.......
^pretty Good finish; I thought your name was Souljah..y is there
a diff, name here?
Det:
Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him
Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in
Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip
Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips
Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick
Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit
^Up to now your flow is nice and smooth
Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal
U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel
^HAHAHAH
This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin
Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin*
Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin
Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin
^good personal
Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit
im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~
^Good start and finish.
Det has to get this, because its close, but the fact that Souljah
did too much self glor and dissed Det's flow when his flow was
better tips my vote to Det.
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