Paraoxysm- Nice verse I really liked the Imaginary. Very Vividly portrat. Nicely done. I liked your emotion, throughout the characters in your piece. Vocab was well balanced. The flow was real good, had multi'z in it. The aspect of your Piece was def in my opinion the creativity and the approach you took. It was original and you made it more superior with your emotion and imaginary.

The Rev- O shit. I REALLY liked this verse. Rev you had a good approach, it was very creative; Dope Concept. I liked the imaginary very decent and very Much detailed and vivdily portrait like Paraoxysm. Vocab, wasn't there. The Emotion was good, Like you can feel it. What surprises me though is your Approach I mean wow I never thought you'll go dat way.

Overall- This was a dope match. The best in my books for this week. Both had good verses and I really Liked both pieces. Emotion wasn't in the right place in this match, but damn the imaginary was on Lock down by both of you. Jeez. So I'mma have to vote for approach and concept. I'mma vote for the rev, cause his was just blew me away. Paraoxsm I liked your approach and the concept, It just seem's that The Rev piece was much creative and had a dope concept...V/Rev.

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