Still Motion- I Like this. You had good imaginary, very good portray so detailed. Creative was good, nice approach. Emotion was also good. The best aspect in your verse was the imaginary, quite decent if you ask me.


E.C.- i like doyur verse it was good had nice imaginary. But very much wasn't detailed like still motion. You had weak emotion to tell you the truth. The best aspect in your verse was the Imaginary. Next Time put Emotion in your verse and expand your imaginary by coming very detailed with it or Metaphors and similies and shit.


Overall- My votes to Still Motion he had a good nice very well writeen detailed verse. He also had emotions which was good also. E.c. you had a good verse but your imaginary wasn't very much detailed like Still motion plus your Emotion wasn't there.

V/ Still Motion.

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