Niceeeeee dawg i like it.I love the concept autumn but also everything u said in it.....Nice worded on all sentances with a real nice flow which would be good as an audio song.Im not so keen on the bit that goes short in the middle i dont understand why u did that
but its your OM!!!!
I wud like to see this on a audio n keep it up!!!!
8/10
Please could u rtf on my OM in my sig!!!! Thanx