my god plez leave all the mother fucking // // // // alone word....

just finish the bar and press ENTER dont continue it with all these // // // it makes it crazy hard to read and grasp fully the flow, the verse on the other hand was good i felt ya on this one cuz u put down ya emotion on this nicely, a decent multis in there, other then that its preety straight wordness, just fix ya danm strcture and u'll be aight....

7/10