listening while i type -


First verse - I liked it.. shit was nice.. kid has talent for real..yea i did hear a lil mobb deep type shit in there.. sounds like em... but good shit..

second verse- i wasent really feelin at all.. the heat wasent there like in the first verse. .. Coul'dve done with out..


Third verse - Omen.. lyrially man you there.. but the flow lagged.. you never fell off.. but you werent really on it na mean.. what you were sayin and ya scheme was on point.. but i agree with senser.. once you find ya flow and make it fit the beat.. you gon be pretty ill

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