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Old 08-15-05, 12:30 PM   #3
~Lady Fiya~
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Jae Gutta sounds like 50 Cent mixed with Shells.. i like how he was kinda singing the rap, it was straight but i thought that was a chorus originally.

Titobronsky still sound like you talking instead of flowing, you miss the beat a couple times, but it's alright. Your rhyme scheme is aight.

Tha Q the only one really riding the beat hard... ya flow was good, emotion was the best outta the three of you. My fav line was the one bout chalk, when you said you not talking bout hopscotch.
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