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Old 08-15-05, 12:40 PM   #11
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lets brake it down..........

okay.........

verse1this wasvey motional, deep lyrics,could flow better....but thats cauze there was long lines so gd job........structure was gd....not any bad

hook:suit well with ur verses......

verse2:ecretty same kind of verse like was mads....maybe better flow.....but those both were gd...................

overal:very gd drop 9/10
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