lets brake it down..........
okay.........
verse1
![Mad](/images/smilies/mad.gif)
this wasvey motional, deep lyrics,could flow better....but thats cauze there was long lines so gd job........structure was gd....not any bad
hook:suit well with ur verses......
verse2:ec
![Stick Out Tongue](/images/smilies/tongue.gif)
retty same kind of verse like was mads....maybe better flow.....but those both were gd...................
overal:very gd drop 9/10