extremely short..... imagery was cool i feel to make ur stuff more interestin try makin ur rhymes more complex n also ur first verse i noticed alot of it didnt rhyme.. was dis intentional????.. hook is cool.. but not structured like a hook should be*shakes head at E.C* u shud kno better fooooool ye not bad but needs to be more to read cos wasnt really alot to pick up on... keep it up