OK...honest opinion here...

FLow was bad.Some lines coulda been shortened or longer for a better flow.I know OM's are not sopposed to be as hard as battke rap...but....A lot of the punches here were basic and played.Mailman/delivery...joke/RVO...played and basic.And at the end...you didn't need to explain your shit.All of ur lines were self explamatory with lack of complexity and pressense of links.The bright side to ur Om was the personals.The one about dissing himself and losing to u were ur best lines.
But overall...don't get full of yourself yet...you could still use the work.

little bitch actin tuff but ya wackness amuses me
and LL slaughterin this cat like animal cruelty
^^basic and flowed bad....2/10
tryna diss my crew... that diss was awfull n shit
ya text is wack n it cudnt get worse till i heard ya audios kid*
^^this was good....6/10
ya cant spit lyrics bitch you not rippin it up
cos your like a gay post man.... your delivery sucks**
^^Played as fuck....4/10
your a gangster?? na you just a wack nerd and gimick
and your rhymes are a joke... like the rapverse olympics
^^This line sucked..RVO ain't that bad..3/10
you a soft kid tryna be hard.. wat ya wantin to fight bro?
youd run and call the cops because you allready lost 5-0***
^^GOOD.....8/10
you change ya name but ima be real n get u facin the truth
cos wen i write my lyrics im known to leave pen n paper abused****
^^basic and we all know his onld name...no explainin needed..4/10
ill cave ya skull in n leave your brain splattered
your just wacker gayer version of the madrapper
^^meh...OK...4/10
you a pussy man you aint wantin to test
cos you like bball players..... only tough on the net
^^............5/10
this is cards.... cos wen i spit ya get dealt
only time you came out on top.. was wen ya dissin yaself*****
^^Your best line..........8.5/10
i rip kids wit sick writtens wen im droppin sick lyrics
just go and bite another concept and make a wack diss wit it******
^^1st line flowed good...but the 2nd line was shit...3/10
you get signed?? lol no label would ever invest
sayin LL audio sucks...... you aint beat one of us yet*******
^^you said enough on his audio already....move ahead...4/10
im better than you.. ya dont wanna fuck wit me kid
its that time of the month... cos i left this pussy bleedin
^^PLayed....2/10

Keep in mind I rated these higher due to this being an OM and not a battle diss...none of these lines would be fit for a battle...

OVERALL-4.5/10....Needs work

Only an honest opinon by me here...don't get mad cause I ain't a dickrider like the others here