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emotion is nice thru this. The topic could of run a bti deeper,but apart from that this is a nice drop. you could of extended your vocab a bit more,more vocab means alot more emotion.
You should of run alot deeper with this topic, taken time and done more of a scripture peice. I know Rv dont like long drops but idf its dope they will read it.
nice drop
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