I like this Om.Wording was good.Flowed stayed constant though you could benifit from some internals here and there.Topic was a lil...cliche...but you delivered it nicely.Vocab was on point.

I also thought it was too short.I know RV doesn't like long OM's...but if it is good...they will read it.i think this coulda benifited from having some from shit in it.

But aside from that...your good at describing an wording your lines.Just work polishing your flow.

Overral-8.5/10