i really liked the ending.....it was pleasant, amongst the rest of your verse.....didn't like all the wording, but you did say it was whipped up quick, so nothing you can't go back and fix.....and at times it was hard to read without the beat, but whatever....good writing, and keep up....def. good for a quick sketch

rtf on the third one in my sig or this link...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203336

thanks yo

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