I have a lot to learn...
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is that Kon as in Kon...troverzey?
Anyway, This shit was pretty cool. It didn't really have any topic or anything, but thats alright.
Some of the multis seemed a bit forced. Some were genuinely forced, but others I think they may just seem forced to other people because of your accent(if you are kon).. like the first line doesnt rhyme perfectly with the second, but if you say it in the right way it does.... and dont use dashes.
The quality of the lines was on and off and some wordplay was a bit simple... But I think it was more on than off.
other than that it was good... good flow.. good vocab and shit.. Just watch those forced multis
If you are kontro, good shit working with a new style... if not.. still good shit.
8/10
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