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Old 08-15-05, 09:54 PM   #27
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Voted For: Ethnic

i kill this nigga,his not worth even bullet,
cut his heads off and put with bull head*....
^^didn't rhyme and was not a punch...1/10
he get six lines,shit thats too bad,
his old rhymes are dead like tupac.....
^^didn't rhyme and weak punch...2/10
you be like xzibit and lose to E,
closer line now i show what you use to be...
^^no punch...except for in the set-up..2/10
you be Bitch like m:Jackson in jail now,
real rapper stand on his feets and never fail down....
^^didn't rhyme....2/10

Your name can be Ethnic, but you are not ethnic....
You are the white wigga you are pathetic.....
^^weak....3/10
No fun no games, youre not even gonna laugh at the fakes.......
You think you are going to be better and better.....
^^didn't rhyme...2/10
And you think that when you are at computer, no matter the weather.....
The sheetlightning, is the really quick......
^didn't rhyme and not a punch...1/10
But you, you get me very sick.......
^^gonna finish that bar???....0/10

OK...ya'll can benifit greatly from the tutorials.Find out what a punch is and shit.And goodness...learn to flow.Half ya'll lines didn't rhyme.But I'll give it to ethnic for actually tryna diss.

Vote-ethnic
RTF
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