Ok...well...you had flow.....stayed constant throughout the whole thing.And the vocab was good.So props on that.

But...your multis were forced.Which is what I expected.As the title shows...you based your whole verse on multis.Which is a big no-no.And when you have forced multis..you have bland content.Didn't seem like you were sayin anything either.

Overall-4/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204478
^^don't be a fag...I read ur shit and left feedback didn't I?