yes, but you were like......"your verse was all multies, which is a big no-no"

like wtf? how is it a big no-no? you're not a pro......too many kids these days think they know what they are talking about.....all you had to say was

" i think some of your multies were forced, but overall, it was decent for multies....try and expand your rhyming horizon though"

like that should have been your feed,

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