ok......

Speats verse....u could work on your flow a lil bit...lyrically it was ok...quality isnt too good...sometimes it seems like it a lil loud...then goes back down...delivery was decent...youve mos def gotten better.....

Hook...was coo...it wasnt extremely great...but it was kinda catchy..prolly best part of song...

Inters verse....you gotta pretty good flow...quality isnt too good...u need to work on the mixing....lyrically it was ok...nothin spectacular....delivery was pretty good too....you got potential man....just up that quality..

Where the F did u get that beat though?....its dope as shit......

but...RTF....on my song....Soccer Kids Diss....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204544


thanks

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