OK...I like this peice.Very different topic than what you'll ussually see around here.I was feelin the multis.Flow was stayed smooth for the most part of the verse.Structure was good.

Only problem was some of the content was..well..corny to say the least.Like that Gulf of Mexico one..c'mon..

But that's a problem that can easily be fixed.

Overall-8/10
RTF Please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204095