Voted For: Natural killa

he's taste'n the sweep,n base'n on heat,it's like he surrounds the winter
n his location is "the ring" because he's wrapped around my finger
^^^kinda decent, with the wittiness and shit, but not too hard of a punch
so call this abuse,cuz wat took u a voyage to move,I did in it one 'trip-pull'(triple)
but least ur name's correct,cause ya 'techs'(text) ain't worth one 'nical'(nikel)
^^^really forced, didn't hit hard.
I'm tired of all these fans,he's callin me fam,his brain's messed up,like I spinned it
cuz,Technical's seeing 'real-asian'(relation) to me,like I had my eyes squinted
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not a punch, its a personal or whatever, but its not dissin him at all.
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all and all i think u had quite a bit forced wordplay... u need to read more good battles and learn how to word your punches better.

tech-

you're support is more useless than wooden chairs!
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real played concept

guy'll find his limbs distorted, cuz this God spittin dat fire that'll cost ya sins
joust n corpse this bitch, fact is, u get 'less feed' than 'disobediant foster kids'!!!
I'll let this dick die n vanish, shut down ya port yo(puerto), I'll maim hispanics
this kid's lame and average, truth is, you have no NATURAL skill or talent!!
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not worded good for a good witty punch.
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also u had some forced lines

both- aint really get how to word punches to hit real hard, but i think natural had wittier lines that if worded better woulda hit well. votes goin to him cuz his verse had potential
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return the vote link in my sig!!!!

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