Voted For: Dopium

He claims he's god's son, man, now ain't that shit absurb?
Well, I guess then I be God, the way I'm "sonnin" this lil' herb
^^hmm...OK I guess...6/10
Just by lookin' @ your name, you're below me, you're straight wack
You ain't even on the level below me, or the one that's after that
^^not much of a punch....1/10
This kid is prolly poor, he ain't even kin, yo
Lookin' out your bedroom, only time you ever win-dough
^^PLAYED AS FUCK!!....a forced rhyme too...1/10
This kid is a pussy, he gon try and escape this sonnin'
It's like I got a cold...... the way I nose you runnin'
^^set-up gay as you already said some sonnin shit..and knows/nose lines are played as fuck...2/10

OK..flow was ite.Thought had a forced rhyme in there..which made it sound sloppy.Had a whole bar that self glorified and wasn't a punch.And too many played lines.You had no personals..and ya didn't do 10 lines.

How you gonna rep a bitch in ya sig who cant even rap
Seriously dog your wack and to tell u honest ur D/R a fag
^^basic.....4/10
kid made 1 video and that was the gayest shit ive seen
"You cant see me" wtf is this a wrestler tryin to be a MC
^^well...1st personal so far in this battle....5/10
do garentee to burn me like wax from candle wics
Kid gots jokes seriously homie you've lost it
^^weak....2/10
all im sayin is his rhymes arnt even halfway decent
should just bassically prohibit your own shit
^^didn't rhyme n punch sucked...2/10
I allready owned this ho a perfect demonstration
parts of ur lifes goin up kid and it aint inflation
^^Good....6/10

Ok...I though this was a bit one-sided.Had a line that didn't rhyme...but aside from it..flow was ite.Structure was good.Didn't see any played lines..but there was some basic lines.Like that 1st bar...which was u just stating shit.I'll give u it for havin a personal and that last bar.

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