Voted For: pictureperfect2

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
^^good...Like the wordplay in set-up..4/10
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
^^played here....3/10
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
^^not much of a punch....1/10

OK..flow/structure was good throughout the whole verse.1st bar was your best.Nice wordplay and all.And that 2nd bar...I know I've heard sumtin similar to it somewhere before.Get more creative.3rd bar wasn't a punch as it was more of gangsta talk.

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
^^OK....but seemed sloppy wit the rhymin words..3/10
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
^^good play of the qoute...7/10
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
^^Ok...but basic...4/10

OK...an ite verse.1st bar was ite..good concept..but didn't like the way it was put together.The 2nd bar was the best in the whole battle.A good personal play of qoute.The 3rd bar was a lil Basic.I think if Mr.Lyrisist put a good punch for the last bar...he woulda had it

vote-PicturePerfect2