Thread: Some Truth
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Old 08-16-05, 10:26 AM   #3
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Short but nice piece

I wish it was a bit longer though, I would've loved to read more about this! The concept was good, like the title said: just spitting some truth. The vocab was on point and the flow was really good. You had good internal rhyming, nicely multis and such.

Keep it up!
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