Just searching.
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Meh. It's not very original. The colors are pretty much blinding as well. I love my rap in orange and bright blue. Also, some lines seemed stretched, you need a better vocab, and when you flex like this you need originality and wordplay...and you didn't have that.
5/10 from what I read, before my eyes turned into bright suns reflecting your colors and exploded.
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