Voted For: soul?uest

SoulQuest- I like this, very decent. I like the Imaginary and the Emoition was good, very awsome. I suggest Nect time use More vocab, you had some but next time use more. I like your flow of this piece had a Poetic Vibe in it. The best aspects in your verse was def the Emotion very Pure and raw. Keep writing. The Concept was very good and plus the Approach of it was decent also.

The Rev-Alright The rev, I felt that you didn't spend that much time on this verse cause something was lacking and that was Emotion (In my Opinion) You had the Imaginary down, but I felt you could've come more vividly Portrait with your Words than that. Use Metaphors or Similies...Feel me? The Best Aspect in your verse was def the Imaginary, wasn't weak nor your best but average.


Conclusion- both drop good verses, but my vote goes to soulquest he had a better verse in my opinion, Much better Emotion and Good IMaginary. Nic eApproahc and Concept. The rev I liekd your verse too but it seem so you could've Come better than that. Your Imaginary was ok didn't seem very detailed and your Emotion wasn't there too.

V/Soul

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