OK...I love the vocab in this shit.Topic was fresh...so good job there.Had some decent multis and internals there.I like the scientific shit in there.This seemed like something Canibus would make.Wording was good.

Now..your main problem was flow.I don't know if it was me readin it wrong or what.And I read it more than once.You had some lines that didn't flow due to poor multis.Take that last bar for example.Didn't rhyme.And some of your lines seemed choppy due to not enough words after the internal.
Take this for example....
"rapidly spitting saliva entraps till death, capturing like spider webs/"
Not the internal is till death...and it's counterpart was spider webs.It's sopposed to meet each other in a way that it rolls off the tongue nicely.I think spider webs came too soon after till death.To certain beats..it may flow well..but on text..no...
That's a problem you can fix by readin your songs over when done

So all in all..you got the content and shit..but just work on flow a bit.

Overall-7/10

RTF PLEASE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204095