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Old 08-16-05, 10:34 PM   #22
IllmaticStatic
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unrestricted got this...

his lines were much better, i liked the light it up punch...it was dope i was also feeling the ugly face lines, your lines w ere a little stretched but overall coo

batman seriously wtf was that you had a horrible rhyme scheme...the bounty on ya head line was bad...you need o elevate

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