|
pain is weakness leaving the body
|
IP:
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by MADDRAPPER
SHORT DISS TO DON007
Even with a strip of land your script couldn't stand on
Property you got a sink hole in your stink scrolls you’re a fan wrong
^didn't get this. no big deal though probably a personal
Your deal is fake go talk to real estate your brain split
And rotten even in plain knit cotton you couldn't be a legit
^srry, but wasn't feelin' this either. not too bad if u freein' though
Player you the type retard that need right guard your underarm
Odor don't thunder a quotas of love with girls you blunder like farm
People, so water the cows before slaughter your bowels
And constipate your brains educate your mainframe with vowels
^was kinda feelin the meta
Your lyrics are like idiots on white wine drunk and write blind
So nighttime stay off the bottle, verses can’t excite minds
|
overall pretty good. i could catch the flow right off the bat, which is good. had some trouble understandin' some of the punches, which isn't a good sign unless they were personals. i gotta say that overall i was feelin' it. 7/10
__________________
"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
untitled
|