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Old 08-17-05, 12:19 AM   #17
chip
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Originally Posted by Hitchcock
I got weapons in pairs, and they not hard to fit in
The rap game like virgin pussey, its hard to get in


^lol, not when i drill. just hit it hard when u start. oh yeah your OM. on the real i looked thru it and i couldn't find anything wrong. the chorus could be hotter, and some lines were sicker than others, but this iz definitely the best OM i ever read. the flow is sort of like something Fabolous would d (take that how u want 2). gotta say though i was REALLY feelin this.

*oh and check out Poetic Scriptures. i got a poem wit this same title (plus some other hot shit) u should check out
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