Odi et Amo
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Aight,
this is ya typical brag and boast piece I suppose. The flow was the best aspect in your verse I think, had some multis, good pace to the entire piece and such. The vocab might be upped a little because you used "bitch" and "nigga" a lot, after a while it got annoying ya feel me? So try to switch it up next time. Had some nice lines in there, good braggin and shit.
Solid work
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