ah'ight.........nice beat choice........common on mixtapes but still solid.......ok flow on 1st is good but the rhyme scheme is very uninspired coulda been more creative with that an the delivery has emotion but not enuff.....then hook comes up....now that takes the emotion up it was koo...but not as catchy as it shoulda been...2nd verse......flow is koo once again the delivery is stronger on this verse....lyrics is decent on both verses but the topic is generic as well as your approach to it, you coulda been more creative an more hype with this but its good enuff to get by as is....overall 7/10......stay up son........1

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