HoLo

Look man,i guess imma have ta hurt-dis-cat...
he Sweet,claimen he nice wit his hershey-raps...
4/5-Nice opener coulda came harder
u gonna merk-me-scrap? thats a big step-u-taken...
cuz u couldnt Exhale Heat even after the Breathes-u-taken...
4/5-I liked the 2nd line it was pretty nice
pls...i rip cats like u,without even Thinken-Of-Scripts...
beef? i'll put Damu'z(bloods) on ya head like u was Creepin-wit-Crips....
5/5-Best line ya had
and i know Drakel aint Keepin-Da-Clips,he to scared ta Beef-Wit-My-Click....
so i'll stuff da Mic In Ya Mouth so u can't Speak-Wit-Ya-Lips...
4/5-Nice closer

Overall:17/20
Feedback:Multis throughout the whole verse, a good drop your structure was off a little bit but it didnt really effect the flow of ya shit nice drop man

Drakel

who the hell are you? seems nothing but a bitch, ya?
cause when i say you're whack as fuck, no, i aint playin witcha
3/5-Coulda came harder with that opened but not to bad
sure i guess you're not that bad, if you dont mind gas leaks
cause you'll never 'C' win.........like blind athletes
4/5-your best verse, you coulda came harder but not to bad
this shit is always losing, man, he never stops
and this bitch thinks he's hard...nah, cream is soft
3/5-coulda came harder..all i can say
i know you're a total wreck, but you think you can mess with this?
im plungin ya into a deep sleep....just so you can rest in piss
2/5-didnt really get that.....rest in piss? seems like you forced that rhyme
put some lotion on my hands, nah fag, this isn't your dreams
just to make it official, my punches leavin you creamed
4/5-A decent closer wanna your better lines

Overall:16/25
Feedback:kinda weak, wasn't really a bad drop but you need to elevate bub

Vote: HoLo/C_R_E_A_M
Reason:Came a lot harder...had multis, a better rhyme structure, better punches

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