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Old 08-17-05, 03:26 PM   #15
M&rk
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Voted For: John Cena

I allready owned this ho a perfect demonstration
parts of ur lifes goin up kid and it aint inflation
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closes bar u had to a witty punch, u shoulda said sumin like ya ... ya level could be inflation and still not go up.
vs.
jon.
ya whole verse had potential but every line was played to shit, but i gotta give it to you cuz everyline had wordplay and a punch.
This kid is a pussy, he gon try and escape this sonnin'
It's like I got a cold...... the way I nose you runnin'
^^
this was funny, very played saying but u put a decent flip on it... decent verse just think of less played punches next time cuz sonnin things is played level lines are really played.
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return wit an honest vote please... link in my sig!!!
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