Voted For: Spoken Word

B-Mac-Ok...I like the concept you took.Silence..to Sniper.Good.U took the creative route with the concept.But one problem I saw was that it was tough to pick up emotion and imajery through ya verse due to poor wording.I found both your wording and vocab as newbish.And the words you rhymed..elementary.

spoken word-I though your concept wasn't as good as B-Mac's.But you executed it better.Better vocab and wording by far.Was a little boring at first...but it got better later on.Very descriptive and more profound.You won in my opinion..but next time..work on making it more interesting.

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