Voted For: Drakel

LoL@ this battle

who the hell are you? seems nothing but a bitch, ya?
cause when i say you're whack as fuck, no, i aint playin witcha
^^Lmao..good play off user title...8/10
sure i guess you're not that bad, if you dont mind gas leaks
cause you'll never 'C' win.........like blind athletes
^^hmm...Ok....6/10
this shit is always losing, man, he never stops
and this bitch thinks he's hard...nah, cream is soft
^^uncreative bar right here....4/10
i know you're a total wreck, but you think you can mess with this?
im plungin ya into a deep sleep....just so you can rest in piss
^^ok play of sig....5/10
put some lotion on my hands, nah fag, this isn't your dreams
just to make it official, my punches leavin you creamed
^^OK....6/10

Ok...had some decent punches.Best one was the 1st bar..the play of the user title.The punch that didn't hit was the 2nd bar.Just seemed to uncreative.When you look at his name..that's like the 1st thing you think off.But overrall..ite verse.

Look man,i guess imma have ta hurt-dis-cat...
he Sweet,claimen he nice wit his hershey-raps...
^^MY goodness.this was the most forced multi I ever seen...2/10
u gonna merk-me-scrap? thats a big step-u-taken...
cuz u couldnt Exhale Heat even after the Breathes-u-taken...
^^why did you have hypens in the make me scrap part?..2/10
pls...i rip cats like u,without even Thinken-Of-Scripts...
beef? i'll put Damu'z(bloods) on ya head like u was Creepin-wit-Crips....
^^weak as fuck...3/10
and i know Drakel aint Keepin-Da-Clips,he to scared ta Beef-Wit-My-Click....
so i'll stuff da Mic In Ya Mouth so u can't Speak-Wit-Ya-Lips...
^^are you even with a crew?..and played punch..3/10

OK...My first advice..leave multis alone.It ain't workin for you.They were as forced as it can get.And stop with the hypens.U don't need it.As for your structure..fix it so that it's normal.

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