Lyrics....
You have a good use of inner rhymes, you get creative with it and it‘s unique from anyone else… if you added mass amounts of multis to the inner rhymes you have then you’d be complete. Seem like you were just talkin bout random things in your verse. No real story line to it, which is fine. Because you actually pulled it off as a glorification verse. Not bad.

Voice/Presence...
Your presence is fine. You have a good voice that anybody would listen to.. Your voice combined with your “you gonna listen to me bitch” delivery is what stands out. Sound like you all over the mic. That’s good and shows you got a lotta experience. And you ride the beat easily.

Emotion/Delivery...
You delivery is very similar to Biggie. Only thing that gets annoying is if you sound like this the entire way through. That’s how people could get bored by listening to your music; however, when you started rapping faster you put more feeling into your lines. That’s the type of shit I was talkin bout before. You made me wanna get out my seat on that part and be like damn. All the intensity built up at that point Some of your adlibs is what got on my nerves. Some were unnecessary.

Flow...
This is what I like about your tracks… you don’t stick the same flow the entire time. You are far from predictable when it comes to flow. When you spit fast as hell, the song went to a whole new level. And your transition from rapping slow to fast to slow again was smooth.


Your presence is hot as is. Lyrics can always be upped but for this type of track, I wouldn’t recommend it. Flow is not something you should worry about, instead work on using your delivery to showcase your lyrics better. As you did in the part where you were flowing fast. You want people to be like AWW shit, lemme rewind that. That was tight right there. Even though this a slow song, you have the potential to make people bounce to this type of shit. I want to see that from you some time soon.

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