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Old 08-17-05, 07:35 PM   #2
noname
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Voted For: one mic

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
^^coulda made sumtin better of the OM..4/10
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
^^multi shoulda match sllyably,n punch was meh..4/10
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
^^u didn't play of the OM..n punch was weak...3/10
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile
^^^basic....2/10

I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth
^^stupuid...2/10
When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO
But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow
^^not much of a punch..1/10
Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT
Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot
^^set-up horrible n punch was shit..2/10
You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter
Will that movie make you act somewhat harder?
^^WTF?....2/10
I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK
Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep
^^no punch...2/10

Ok..this battle goes to open mic due to actually having a punch in every bar.Mike was just sayin shit outta nowhere and a lot of his lines weren't punches.

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