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Old 08-17-05, 11:56 PM   #12
PhreeNapdizzle
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Misk's punchline was weak.. knowing the limited lines he could write.. he tried to make a lot happen in them, and it make it seem like he was writing a book with long sentences.. the punch itself had a good meaning, but too many words to get there..

I think Misks punch was a harder hit.. but flow overpowers punches to me in a battle.. id go with picture perfect in this battle.. his flow was top knotch.. he had a strong punch in it.. and he didnt force meanings..

and some 1 mentioned early.. if you need to explain your 2 line verse.. you gotta do something about it.. dont find words in the dictionary for a 2 line punch battle.. keep it simple, basic, and use real skill at this.. peace

vote - PicturePerfect
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