k well, the beat is really good, your flow is very very good nice emotion man, really solid in this one you had a good set of lyrics as well, very lyrical type thing but you had a very good story, nice imagery very good choices of words, i just see you elevatin so strong man, keep workin hard your really on a strong level man. sometime we should collab just me n you, after the one wit trip.

anyway very good man 1

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