Voted For: Acumen

i'ma start by saying i'll shove my dick down your throat till it hits your tonsils..
and your rhymes couldnt rock it.. if they were attached to missile launchers..
^^Played concept with the couldn't rock it blah blah blah...3/10
jumped on my cock in my thread thinking he posed a threat.. damn ho.
skep.. i know your working for the sewers.. cause your always in man holes..
^^hmm...OK....5/10
you cant handle it.. my rhymes sick.. im a cannibal so just die bitch..
and im finna eat this clown.. cause you know that im hannibal's sidekick..
^^not much of a punch...1/10
will skep get a W or an L... well i think we can all guess the letter...
cause skep couldnt bee hood.. with a new orleans hornets sweater...
^^Ok wordplay.....5/10

OK..decent verse.Flow and structure was good throughout the whole thing.I thought the 2nd was 4th bars were your best.But you seem to have a generic way of dissing.Like you couldn't be this if you blah-blah-blah.You know.But keep goin..a style'll come to you eventually.

Twist-His-Neck Go Ahead Say You Gon’ Lift-A-Tech, Eaze-Ya-Vibe…..
Strip-Ya-Vest And Rip-Ya-Chest Apart Eat Ya Heart And Speak-Ya-Pride!!!//
^^good multis as it flowed..but where's the punch?...2/10
This Is The Option, I'll Call You 'Stripper' Cuz Its 'Ass That Ya Droppin'
Leavin AC 'Diss Owned' (disowned) Similar To 'Kids Up For Adoption'!!//
^^DOPE.....8/10
Grab-The-8-N Bend You Back-To-Waist-N Leave Ya Face Wit Lacerations …..Laughs-Is-Raisin
Cuz U A Dick Wit A Dick In Mouth Similar To A Fags-Engagement!!//(Think!!!)
^^c;mon man....2/10
When I Spit "Testages-Ya-Flip-Ya-Dome" And Like Funerals My "Message-Will-Send-Ya-Home"
Ill Leave You "Restin-Wit-Ribs-Of-Chrome" Homie If U Wanna Stay Testin Even "Ya-Kids-Get-Owned"!!//
^^weak....2/10

OK..bad verse.Here's what.I think the only good bar was the 2nd one here.It was probably the best in the battle.But the rest of your punchlines lacked.Get more consistant.Comprise of a verse of punches like the one you had in the 2nd bar..and you'll be on your way.Don't be so caught up in multis.Punches are more important.N ur structure.fix it up.DOn't leave a space within every bar,stop with the (") by every multi,n don't have this(//) at the end of your bars .

Vote-Acumen
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