hmmm o.k....i couldn't quite grasp the concept of this drop...but i'm guessing it was about random stuff hence the title....anyway your flow was off so work on that....present each line so that its near enough the same length as this makes it easier to read.....try not to shorten words to one letter....for example use are instead of r.....overall though this drop was aight....work on all that i mentioned though and it will be better.....i look forward to reading more from you

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