Voted For: opt1k

shadow gets this...his verse had more flow punches were more direct and decent even without personals in therre...ets were cool and his structure was waaaaaaaaaay better...one advice to both yo...quit usin slashes in ur verses..it kinna messes the apperance up..black...dawg ur verse was just off...ur opner fell off mayne...the first line was ok but u demolished it with ur 2nd line...work more on ur verses dude...try makin ur lines of the same length so ur verse could flow at least a lil...that would be headin a step foward trust me...u didnt stay stable neither in punches concepts mets and structure also flow...u need to work a lil more...try by droppin verses in the "diss the person above you" cypher that could help u a lil bit...

anyways shadow gets this hands down with my xplanation ^^ + he seems to have mo xperience in battle...from what i c...

holla

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