Poetry doesn't have to rhyme people!

Good piece, didn't like how you used capitals but other than that it was good. You could've gone a little more into detail here and there actually. Some insightful lines in there, conscious things that you wrote in here, truth spoken. Vocab might be improved but that's no biggie. Emotion was there, no imagery piece though. Might add some more pictures next time you know.

'IF THIS WAS MEANT TO BE WHATS NEXT TO HAPPEN'
^favorite line...

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