Voted For: Paranoid

Ok Intermental = This was a nice piece but fuck man how short u wanna make it? lol i know this was ur 1st topical so u didnt really grasp how long they should be and how important that factor was
Imagery = 2/5
Flow = 4/5
Emotion = 5/5
Creativity = 1/5
Ontopic = 4/5

Overall = 16/25
Abit of advice throw more creativity in and ur topicals would be sick

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Paranoid = Yeah. this was def a dope read
Imagery = 4/5
Flow = 4/5
Emotion = 3/5
Creativity = 3/5
Ontopic = 4/5

Overall = 18/25

Nice drop the closer was really nice btw

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